adultery

with a single look upon your body i see the greed and lust that is forecasted above me.
with every second i spend wishing to have your body and to feel your touch
i feel my heart begin to become filled with lust as your ways are memorizing
and your words are hypnotizing, i forget of the wife i have vowed my oath to.
your sayings are of oil and your lips of honeycomb, but i see your end is bitter as wormwood.
for i see not your as sharp as a two edge sword, not heeding to the warnings of what god has shown me.
i begin to forget of the life that god has blessed me with, and start pondering the path of life i could have
with you. As our bodies become intwine in lust my soul becomes consumed with hatred towards my flesh
and wife. wishing i could be freed from the oath i gave my wife i only see the death and dispersal that
forcaste over my soul and body. the heartache i do not for see that i give my wife but only see
the evil of what you speak and the lust that i endure i can’t break free from your spell. just wishing
i could go back to way of my normal life i see that theres no turning back from the sin i have committed.
only wanting the wife i vowed my oath to, i see now that i will never have her again.

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tell me what you think ppl i would really appreciate it. thanks

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to be honest we both

to be honest we both committed adultery, needles to say we are still together but not happy. i wrote it because i have trouble sleeping and i went out for a midnight drive and when i came back she thought i was cheating on her again.

ashes_theartofburning's picture

Well..

We ladies tend to think like that when the man just leaves in the middle of the night.
You can't really blame her though.
I really hope you two can work things out.
Honesty is the best policy. ^.-


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

ashes_theartofburning's picture

This was a guilty write. The

This was a guilty write.

The feelings in which you express over the conflict of the circumstances at hand frustrate with the result that almost always ignites a flame that can't be dampered.

However,
This was a very elucidated piece,
and a brilliant write.

I wish you the best of luck.
^_^


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Very powerful and real! This

Very powerful and real! This could shape up to be an excellent poem! Keep working at it it is one we should all read. Kind regards SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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