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The Chance
The Chance
To be sure, the one who speaks,
The one who seeks the soul,
Shall find the heart
That lets them breathe,
The one that makes them whole.
But should one waste a chance to find
The one to light their fire,
Then the magical glow
That warms one’s heart
Shall certainly expire.
My lesson was that I should not be afraid to tell my true feelings to someone, although careful wording is recomended. Anyway, life and love are adventures, the most precious we are allowed, and wasting the opportunity to discover precious relationships is throwing the greatest gift back in the face of the [Grand Architect of the Universe].
real life
may i ask what your lesson was?
let us always be brave enough to tell others how we feel.. even when we are scared they will reject us
Well penned. Beautiful poem. Linda
Nice tripping rhythm, tied cleverly to the message. And yeah, I like the message too. Excellent bonding of form and theme, well done! Ken
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