I'm 15, and not a super expeirenced writer, but please be as critical or uncritical as you like.
The Descent into Madness
Blackened eyes mutter to themselves
A silent man cackles to himself
Mindlessly chanting a rant of raving
Gradually losing all sanity because of the loving
That was never to be
His cries are echoed
His moans are full of sorrow
His whispers are then followed
As he plummets into the descent
The descent into madness
Nevermore shall he see
Nevermore shall he listen
Nevermore shall he hear
Nevermore shall he care
But evermore shall he fall
Into the descent of madness
Tired eyes whisper to the lies
A sleepless man moans to himself
Hopelessly craving and mournfully crying
Gradually losing all sanity because of the happiness
That was never to be
His chants are echoed
His cackles are filled with sorrow
His mutters are then followed
As he plummets into the descent
The descent into madness
Nevermore shall he go by
Nevermore shall he try
Nevermore shall he be happy
Nevermore shall he be loved
But evermore shall he fall
Into the descent of madness
Broken eyes chatter to themselves
A crazed man sits by himself
Sinisterly plotting a scheme of killing
Gradually losing all his sanity because of the life
That was never to be
His plots are echoed
His seat is filled with sorrow
His chattering then follows
As he plummets into the descent
The descent into madness
Nevermore shall he be taunted
Nevermore shall he be parted
Nevermore shall he suffer treachery
Nevermore shall he have to worry
Because off ward he goes
With gun in his hand
To seek his revenge
On the ones who pushed him
Deep down into a descent
A descent into madness