Ugonna Wachuku
Slowly, whistling winds and waves
embrace my soul on this voyage to
new reality.
Like a river, I follow my course
through beckoning landscapes and
simple seas.
Through moonlit forests of home
and beauty, I walk to the beat
from nature's heart.
There is silence in the air.
There is a song in my heart.
There is unfolding desire to
be all that I must be to you
and to humanity.
Down river roads and pathways,
I follow your footprints to
mountain tops where bald eagles
teach eaglets the mystery of
calmly soaring through life.
From high grounds and moving
landscapes on peaceful sea shores
hidden within you, the story unfolds.
From mountain tops of glory and
beauty, you call me to fish and
dine with caring angels.
There will be yet
another voyage.
When, finally, we arrive at those
headwaters, there will be blue
waterfalls and glad dolphins to
welcome you and me.
These blue waterfalls will be
our compass for the journey
ahead. Smiles and songs will
flower us to bountiful life.
Waterfalls of blue will define
our love for humanity!
And when I meet the coming,
new morning of hope and inspiration,
I will shed tears because your loving
blue waterfalls will be
my caring companion
for life!
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Blue Waterfalls
~ Critiques/Comments ~
Abritelite .
Your BlueWaterfalls took me on a journey that I really enjoyed. Keep them coming in :) abritelite
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Renee' Quinn
welcome home..... you have found a place that your work will be loved and amired.... this one just made me feel like I was floating along on a raft.... you have such an amazing and powerful style..... once again... I welcome you home.... and hope that you stay with us a while.. Renee'
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Farah D
another lovely piece. Beautiful and calming images takes you on a beautiful journey. The kind of poem that i could read over and over again.
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Melvin Lee
A wonderful sense of peacefulness in this poem, Ugonna..Smilesz. Thanxs for painting such a unique and mesmerizing journey for the mind of every reader. Glad to have read it. interesting title too. :)
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Mona Omar
blue waterfalls is a lovely poem full of beauty
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Charisma *T.A.* Makatita-P
Thank you for this wonderful journey.....enjoyed every line. Charisma
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Angel Wolf
Mesmerizing beauty is the essence of this poem!! You create a lovely feeling with this "most perfect" poem. Angelwolf
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Teresa Jacobs
Such a beautiful poem. You always know how to weave your words to create such magical places.
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Robin Schmidt
This paints such a picture in my head, I can picture everything the mountins the rivers.. everything its amazing!!I love it!!
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2002-02-01 15:09:59
Betty Hattersley
Wow...what a poem
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2002-02-25 17:04:38
Lesa Gay
I experienced this picture as if I were there. Thanks for the beauty! ~Lesa~
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2002-02-28 14:22:12
Douglas Lazard
Hi Ugonna, There is so much peace in this poem... It take the reader down a wonderfully slow and comforting ride through it's life! I love poetry of water and waterfalls and have written much on this topic myself. I've a feeling I have met a wonderful new friend!
Peace and love ~~~~ Dougie ~~~
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2002-03-01 11:09:25
Tim / manatee Marshall
HI,i give this my best teake (widi) wish i'd done it !
love what your eyes see and your fingers write
L&P
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2002-03-17 14:17:30
Bernard Shaw
A most beautiful piece of poetry. I sense the underlying tones of simplicity with a vivid journey to a long lost part of what was once common to all the peoples of this earth. A small touch of paradise. Flows well and tells a story that nature has been telling us for generations. I am very impressed and will be reading more of your works. I feel that you have a natural talent in telling us what to look for in our daily lives. A piece well away from the humdrums of normality. Thank you for sharing. bern
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2002-05-02 10:45:18
mona
beautiful poem
2002-08-03 15:24:26
Eunice Perkins
Such a feeling of serenity and peacefulness makes this wonderful to read.
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2002-08-07 10:47:05
Geneva Becker
I really enjoyed the voyage. I love the imagery.
Thanks also for stopping by on my page. I am a graduate student now, with no time to truly write. I envy you...
Geneva
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2002-10-31 02:30:57
Patricia Jones
A heavenly poem. It simply surges with beauty you wish you could live in forever.
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2002-11-12 17:53:41
Karyn Indursky
This poem is absolutely beautiful. You walk me through this journey while making my emotions raw with love, curiously, wonder. I felt as though I was away from today and stepping into a clensing when I let go of dirty thoughts, feelings, notions to be be more than cleansed, but freed. If that wasn't enough you let me have one person to go along with me. I loved to have the allowance of company because it allowed me to share myself and a world to love. Thanks for the wonderful read.
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2003-05-02 08:27:41
Ruth Lovejoy
Your love and respect for nature and an acute eye to the falls for its beauty is very evident here..Great piece!
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2008-01-13 15:17:50
Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman
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Once again I walked in to read some of your poetry and I really enjoyed reading them. I enjoyed Blue Waterfalls thouroughly, keep up the good writing.
Theresia
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2008-04-04 06:54:53
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