Fallen In (Into, etc.):
English language definition(s): https://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/fallen+in
we all have fallen—
(in the Midnight Sky)
we all have fallen—
(midnight sky)
the beauty
of roses & orchids
without butterfly
dainty backdrops
confirming variety
eggshells and seashells
broken, sand's grainy
we all have come
together for it, rational beings
we rightfully fit,
perpetually belonging in
knowing the beach trees
this much,
we know how
hardy we can get
without mulch
lovingly
as the great wonders
of the sea,
we never really have
painted
what's
seaworthy
Author's Notes/Comments:
Reedited 4.) 01.07.2023 [03:02-03:16] (Reedited my grammar for this Notes/Comments Box/Section for clarification.) 3.) 01.02.2023 [21:32]; 2.) 01.02.2023 [09:54]; 1.) 01.02.2023 [00:58]
1.) This time's reedition consists of one misworded adjective from the first line in the following verse:
"dainty backdrops
confirming variety"
(I previously supposed that I had used the correct word form for my concept that I hoped that could fit the right mental abstract while in that spur of the moment or in the middle of composing each lines. But, I think, I got distracted or, for another reason, got plainly misused a proper word for what I was meaning to imply, which must be something else other than "dainty".. Later, that was changed to the adjective "zany"...but I forgot the exact word in English really..and have muddled through. Upon that realization, at the time of keying this in 01/02/2023, I reverted to its original wording.)
2.) Momentarily, the poem's spacing (& other visual elements) were decidedly reedited (thinking how those, i.e. "visual", elements can cross artistic boundaries and or how its intersubjective features or how it relates to other multiperspective notions in meaning-making & sense-making..(such as in the case of concrete poetry vs. visual poetry) and as also pertaining to intertextuality—most of all, impact its totality (quality, et al). Thank you for reading on.
3.) Third reedition consisted some spacing readjustments (of the verses).. and, earlier or in the prior change, the addition of pictures derived from the public domain.
