Mother, Mother

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mother, mother (reboot)

 

Mother, Mother — are you crying? 
Come look: the roses are dying… 
their petals curl like ash, 
copper-scented decay 
clinging to each stem. 

Behind your door, 
a distant sigh stirs 
the silence between these walls. 

Mother, Mother — I am hungry. 
Come see the dishes clinking, 
plates piled high 
in pale morning light; 
the sour tang of stew 
gone rancid lingering 
like a stubborn memory. 

Mother, Mother — I am lonely. 
Come close: my chest caves inward, 
the lock of my heart cracks open, 
ribs clicking in the silence— 
your voice the missing note. 

Oh, mother — are you sleeping? 
Come and run 
(Let’s play in the sun once more.) 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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(rhymed version)





Mother, Mother — are you crying?  
Come look: the roses are dying…  
their petals curl like ash,  
clinging tight in autumn’s sash.  

Behind your door, a secret sigh  
stirs the stillness, bends these walls awry.  

Mother, Mother — I am hungry.  
Come see the dishes clinking,  
plates piled high in pale morning light;  
the sour tang of stew gone rancid,  
a hungry bite so far from sight.  

Mother, Mother — I am lonely.  
Come close: my chest caves inward,  
lock of my heart splintered and sundered;  
ribs clicking in the hush unspoken—  
your voice the missing token.  

Oh, mother —  
are you sleeping?  
Come and run  
to chase the golden sun.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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