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Fall Out

I can't sustain,

I can't remain

 

I can't stay here

Oh I'm sinking in fear.

 

Everything I've got

Just stops

And drops

Everything drops,

Falls.

 

I've lost everything,

it is reality

Al I've got left is this body.

Everything Fell.

And damned to an unknown hell.

 

I have nothing left.

But this body.

 

I will fall

Fall down.

Whatever's left will fall.

 

I can't hold on any longer,

 

with no doubt,

I will Fall Out

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My special 70th poem. I'm proud of my self to be growing as a writer, and FALLing in love with poetry! And I'd love to grow some more! I am open to criticism, because I know now that you should always expect some criticism with everything you create and present.

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last updated 29 March 2013 - 2:21am
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