SWEET CHANGELING #

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JOURNAL # 37

for lowly men
love is a mere
street potion
sold and or given
out at some
passing carnival
to the milling masses
ah but for cloud high
soul filled men
(such as yourself!)
love is an elixir
so then
imagine what love
is for cloud high
lady poetesses?
it is the begin/end all
to a deeper life
as she longed for it
you touched this 'Sweet Changeling'
with the tender fingers of your words
I thank you for that
for often bliss is reading something
as lovely as it was unexpected
and you poet sir gave both in equal
part to the endeavor's pursuit.........
(April 1, 2010 256am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

a poetic critique of fellow post poems poet Muhammad Naveed Ahmed's poem My Heart And Soul!

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