Drift

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"Drift"



falling

calling

"i cry to you"



dreaming

screaming

"what to do"



dying

trying

"to avoid this"



drinking

thinking

"i'm in distress"



groping

hoping

"searching for daylight"



undaring

despairing

"succumbing to the night..."

Author's Notes/Comments: 

read the 1st two lines on each stanza and then only read the third line on each - it still makes ense :) w00t --- feel the depression, the hopelessness, of this piece??

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