YOICKKKKKKKKKsssssss aaannnddd aaawwwaaayyy

You know........... I have been told,

Put your..... "writing" ...............on hold,

And .....talent .......you have none,

Will with that........ I am done.



This is just ....SOMETHING..... in my head,

I think that in some emotions are DEAD,

And you know...... to me that is so sad,

I think that it.... is really...... too bad.



When some say they ........know it all,

They say it is a FAIR..... call,

I don't understand what it is,

Why they think it is their BIZ.



This is not to say,

I WILL NOT...... write anyway,

At this game......they will not win,

They think my writing is a sin.(HA HA)



While here I had... FUN ...for real,

But then it became... "SUCH"... a big deal,

I hope that.... ALL of you..... know,

I leave here with ....FRIENDS ....to show.



I may be down but I AM NOT out,

That is not what this is about,

It is just time for me to think,

I see no poems here that STINK!!!!!!!!!!!!



I see peoples thougths from DEEP inside,

And I know behind those you hide,

So come out and let us see your face,

Don't hide in some dark place.



I am glad that I met some of you,

You have been FRIENDS thats true,

I will always hold you dear,

Oh, and over this I shed no tear.



I have been told.... poetry has no emotion,

My...MY...MY...what a SILLY notion,

Poetry with out feelings,

To me that is like a home with no ceilings.



So if you want to rip this apart,

Go ahead go back to the START,

Don't leave out not one line,

'Cause some of these words are a friend of mines.










Author's Notes/Comments: 

to all of my FRIENDS here... and you know who you are.... and for those that aren't ...... this is for you.....YOICKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSS and away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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