DREAMING BAREFOOT

 

 

dreaming barefoot

riding a car

to nowhere

 

college dorms

emptied hope

misadventures

patently denied

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was actually based on a dream sequence I recently had.  I jotted down notes at 3 AM and shaped the septolet the next day.  There may also be a related haibun on the dream as I did get some good notes jotted down in that nocturnal half sleep moment.  For additional reading check out this poem by Starward:

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/starward/poem/1092449#comment-521626

 

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yes!...

yes!...

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maybe. . .

maybe. . .

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I agree!!!!

I agree!!!!


Starward

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thank you

thank you