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Evening time

well-lit balcony

how long must I watch the sea?



The breeze hums

a musical tune

with the rhyming of the waves.



Many lights shine

but she's so busy

for "money, money, money".



Moon ascends

for a short short while

and then it is only me.



With the dark

and forgotten songs -

WHO CAN MEND MY BROKEN HEART?



Muhammad Naveed Ahmed (Muhammad7 - my ID at www.haikuhut.net)



1) RESPONSE BY 'POETICPIERS'



   A love that's new

   provides the glue

   to mend a heart

   that's torn apart.



2)  RESPONSE BY Muhammad7 (Muhammad Naveed Ahmed)



    Words good and sentiments true,

    O poeticpiers my thanks to you;

    But where is, tell me, sincerety?

    True love, unswerving loyalty?



   Oh how I long to be loved wholly,

   But it is just my heart's folly,

   To expect this from a selfish world,

   Where all that means more is money.