At the edge of being, where static meets starfire. Placemark image by Midjourney v6
Welcome.
The eleven poems gathered here navigate the precarious landscapes of the human spirit when pushed to its limits. They delve into the heart of my despair, the weight of systemic indifference, and the profound ache of potential loss; yet, they also listen for the fainter frequencies of hope, the stubborn and often dangerous spark of hope, and the enduring power of love and legacy.
This collection charts a journey — not always linear and often raw — from the direct cry of a soul in crisis to more fragmented, imagistic explorations of a fractured self. It witnesses the evolution of voice and form as a means of grappling with overwhelming realities, seeking solace, and ultimately wrestling with the choice to endure.
From structured verse to free-form laments and contrapuntal dialogues, these poems invite you to bear witness to the echoes left by a life at the threshold and the faint, persistent starfire of what might yet be.
To best appreciate this journey, I suggest reading the poems in the following order, so you may also see the refinement and subtle, nuanced changes in style, tone, and techniques, as I did.
The suggested reading order is below (I have now added a number before the name of the poems to assist).
1. "Tender Echoes in Ink (Original)"
2. "The Unread Ledger"
3. "Tender Echoes in Ink -revised"
4. "Absolution in Ink -rewrite"
5. "The Carrion Sky"
6. "Monologue of a Unmoored Mariner"
7. "Caesura of the Self"
8. "Ink Unspooled at the Threshold"
9. "Between Broken Paths and Stars"
10. "Thresholds - Two voices one crossing"
11. "Schrödinger Soliloquy II (4 ways)"
12. Author's Reflection (Prose - for closure)
Thank you for joining this exploration.
Title | Comments | Views | Updated | Posted | |
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1 | Author's Reflection on Static & Starfire: Poems from the Edge of Being | 8 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
2 | 11. Schrödinger Soliloquy II (4 ways) | 7 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
3 | 9. Between Broken Paths and Stars | 7 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
4 | 5. The Carrion Sky | 2 | 11 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago |
5 | 2. The Unread Ledger | 9 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
6 | 10. Thresholds - Two voices one crossing | 12 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
7 | 8. Ink Unspooled at the Threshold | 12 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
8 | 7. Caesura of the Self | 10 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
9 | 6. Monologue of a Unmoored Mariner | 12 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
10 | 4. Absolution in Ink -rewrite | 10 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
11 | 3. Tender Echoes in Ink - revised | 10 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago | |
12 | 1. Tender Echoes in Ink | 10 | 2025/05/12 | 1 week ago |