Dalton Patterson

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Once Upon A Time


 

I lived across the street from a pomegranate tree
who hung its most fruitful branches over the neighbor's
fence, as if to provide the passerby if not with a meal
then its sheer beauty alone. I was sprouting avocado
saplings---three thriving beauties---at the time
and often brought them outside into sunny rays and
simply stood and socialized with them. I liked to take
them out in the moonlight as well, especially for the
ambiance. Meanwhile I harvested dozens of pomegranates.
I immediately learned not to forcefully pluck the fruits,
because not only does that mean the tree isn't yet ready
to give away its babies, it also hurts the tree and signifies
an unripe fruit. Thus I would gently check whether to
pluck the pomegranates with a little wiggle.
Anyways, as you know, they are a tricky food to get into,
so I would wait until I was in my kitchen to collect all
their seeds at once, which is very hard work, but well
worth it. Then I delighted myself in savoring the
scrumptious, frugal rubies and also fed them to
my beloved kombucha. I did this daily and soon found
myself in absolute awe as I studied the glorious pomegranate.
 I was overwhelmed. I convinced myself it was
a dinosaur.

by Dalton Patterson

http: postpoems.org/authors/pungus 

 



 

 

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 In the poem "Meeting The

 


In the poem "Meeting The Crew" Dalton made me think that new cosmonauts meeting a crew

for a many years' journey is akin to being told 'here are your new marriage

partners.. not a thing you can do about it'


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"Gazing at the poison liquid bubbling in the fragile chalice, I sit distempered and contemplate grace,"  -Dalton Patterson-

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'the listening moon, itself a

'the listening moon, itself a protected pearl, and the cold skies in bloom with stars'  You have added new layers of meaning to the moon and stars'

 

'Now the only real strife that I keep right here---right here---

within the crimson chambers of a yearning human heart,'

 

exquisite lines in a beautiful poem "The Yellow Land"

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/pungus/poem/1102210

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'Oh, I am a small speck of dust

from the chopped crumbs, lust,

 the tree of knowledge turned

 into various books about stuff;

 hovering, floating free, flying

 all far on the edge of deep void.

 

I have tired myself of dwelling

through many lives, and yelling

inside my mind, very much like 

 a crazy chimp throwing its shit.'


from the following poem above

https://www.postpoems.org/authors/pungus/poem/1102188

 

I am the simple man, looking to command

a mere page worth of some silly strand

of ... poetry—  

 

 

 



 

 

 


 

 

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as long as I know your poet name and can find your unique and powerful

writing


 

 

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Likewise

I should like to say to you, absolutely,

that you are on a meaningful mission,

gifting us all with truth and harmony.

bananas are the perfect food

for prostitues

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Sorry

I am in a battle with how to present my identity.

I will probably keep Pungus as my poetry pseudonym.

Thank you for giving me respectful recognition.

bananas are the perfect food

for prostitues

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from the poem Catacombs

"Forsaken to the catacombs
With a lantern and a blanket
Stomping and smashing
Old prisoners’ dry bones
Little fragments of life
Song of stillness and silence
Dreams broken down"

From the poem "Catacombs"
https://www.postpoems.org/authors/pungus/poem/1104472

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'Feeling the fingers of death tickle me'


 

 

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 'Gazing at the poison

 

'Gazing at the poison liquid bubbling in the fragile chalice, I sit distempered and contemplate grace,'

 

from his poem 'Thinking Not Doing'