The portrait you painted,: The portrait you painted, with brushstrokes of eloquence, is one of rare beauty, self-assurance and an alluring mystique. So brilliant, the way you expressed a desire to enter the fortress that surrounds her, to know the exquisite spirit within, but such a lofty endeavor would mean unraveling "the mystery of time".
More than a tribute: a radiant, timeless monument!
Cavafy certainly shines: Cavafy certainly shines through here in your majestic and sumptuous poetic sanctum. The atmosphere and the delirious heights of rapture are a powerful combination as well as a worthy tribute to Kaisarion. Well done!
Thank you so much, my words: Thank you so much, my words cannot fully express my gratitude. First, it's a comment from you, Then you also mentioned Cavafy. I am just bowled over by your kind comment.
You should learn how to spell: You should learn how to spell "boat." Also, the boatload that you smell is in your own port, and not Patricia's. Please do not comment on my poems if you need to insult other poets. Either comment on the poem, or don't waste my time and space.
What is wrong with you? You: What is wrong with you? You have got some nerve coming on to my comment section to insult a fellow member of PostPoems and the person that I happen to believe is the finest Poet posting here. So I will ask again: what is wrong with you?
Since the theater was empty..: Since the theater was empty. I have no problem with what you and he were doing. If there were others there, please be aware they are not there to watch you and your boyfriend engaging in sexual activity. Please keep the moaning to a minimum. Thank you.
This was so much fun. Really: This was so much fun. Really enjoyed your intentional, delightfully snarky forced rhymes.
"hope they go far away-bors" That's a hoot!
Anything that can make me smile and chuckle right now is golden. Great escapisism. Thanks!
I wish I had the time to give: I wish I had the time to give this magnificent achievement the accolades it deserves. I'll just say that you succeeded on every level: the emotional impact, the artistry, Cavafy's delicate thunder and the celestial beauty infused in every word.
Congratulations on this!
This is deliciously dark,: This is deliciously dark, pensive and wistful like many of my 3am thoughts but much more eloquent. Your notes really nailed the mood and the mindset. Beautifully composed and resonant. Enjoyed!
I was sincere in my: I was sincere in my reflections on this work of art. Thank you for your unwavering support and the courtesy of acknowledging all my comments. Stay true to your calling and keep shining your light.