The dancing butterfly

 

She scorched the earth with

her sway

 

And bent the moonlight

to her will

 

Her delicate silhouette in

the evening

 

was the very calling card

that drew me

 

to kiss her

 

 

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SSmoothie's picture

How delightful, elegant,

How delightful, elegant, classy and concise 

Mystical qualities draw you in and the end doesn't dissapoint! Beautifully written and easy to enjoy not 5oo much, just enough! Excellent! Hugss ss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

patriciajj's picture

This little gem truly rocks!

This little gem truly rocks! The sensuality, made palpable with serpentine movement and beguiling images, is intense and astonishing. The wordplay: cunning. The entire creation: a huge success.

 

Respect and applause!