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There's a chance you'll break my heart
And that chance keeps us apart
Chances are I'm crying
Statistics show you're lying

There's a chance you don't care
And that chance isn't rare
Chances are I'll be in pain
Statistics show all love is vain

Chances are I'm really strong
And chances are I'm wrong
The chances are too few
In the statistics of dating you

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I never did like statistics

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©11 April 2002 - 2:11pm — running_with_rabbits
13 April 2002 - 3:26am — Nicole.J.Burgess
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it's true
all love is vain!
and its good but it ends too fast

nikki

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15 April 2002 - 9:42pm — turonah
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Not a bad poem, but I have to agree with you in the fact that it seems to end too fast
I don't know if the line "Chances are I'm crying" is supposed to be like that, just because the rest of the poem is in the future, not the present ... maybe you meant "Chances are I'll be crying"?
I do like the lines that start off the last part, tho
"Chances are I'm really strong
And chances are I'm wrong"
Keep up the good work

Reuben