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Man the way people boast, can't miss it, it's on TV radio plus they post coast to

coast. We love poking out our chest, boasting I'm the best, to the hell with the 

rest. Laughing like it's a big joke when we rag on folk a very heavy yoke



I remember life being more clear when people would lend an ear or this I would

hear. May I be of assistance, what do you need. What's been allowed to supersede?

That moster greed. Now we all have an emptiness that needs to be filled, we try pills

thrills and even ill will, going down hill.



Then get pissed when in life we remiss, some fall into the abyss, trying to reach that

state of bliss. Then all they can foresee is misery, even with a college dergee, misery

do love company.


So we make up contests, trying to reach some sort of success nonetheless we digress

trying to find, who's the best. Although we do have our super powers. We're taught

never to cower, you're a beautiful flower but things do go sour,

living in Ivory towers.



Now if you want to boast about who's foremost. check out this bloke who wasn't

blowing smoke, whenever He spoke. the man was no joke. The man was shrewd,

He fed the multitude, neve rude nor would He delude, minds and bodies, He



A healer of the sick, a peacenik without the politics. Never a squatter, He's called

The Potter. The man even walked on water. He's the real deal in which you can always

appeal, if there are storms in your life, He can make 'em kneel.

Peace Be Still.


And hears the kicker, more potant than liquor and quicker than any city slicker. You see,

it had been aforesaid so he knwe what was ahead and he could have fled, instead, He

was nailed to the cross where He bled. Then was raised from the dead.


So for all those who think they're hard, check out The King of Kings and Lord of Lords.

Where you shall stand in total awe with the rest. Every knee shall bow, every tongue

shall confess, Now Who's The Best?



So if you want to boast about who's utmost, then we can all give a toast from coast

to coast, to The Lord Of Hosts and receive The Holy Ghost.


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In order to discern you must learn, to look, listen and learn.

Your worldly ways adjourn, just don't be to stern.


Remove your shoes and socks, step out of the box for the

world you now live is a paradox.


You may frown, you may feel you're about to drown, stand

firm, you will abound for your feet will placed on

Hallowed Ground.


So (be quick to listen, slow to speak and slow to wrath) the

beginning to walking a righteous path. (James 1:19)


And you can't go by what the world think, when it says your

work stink. Keep doing your do and don't shrink, wink, you'll

emerge in the pink.


Nor don't shlep, do it with pep and take it step by step

because you're The Good Lord's rep, Yep.


There's about to open an important door. Just who is

this message for?

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In the not so distant future just can't say when. Although

I think about you time and time again. Soon we'll meet

becoming the best of friends, you are my Godsend.


You'll probably laugh when I try to croon for your lovely

heart I come to swoon even though I'm off tune it will

be soon, I'll be placing a ring on your finger the stone

will be the moon.


When we have our tryst, our own paradise in the

midst becoming inflamed from the first kiss. I believe

you get the gist.


For now I'll pray, I'll wish, I'll even fish to come to you

my enchanting dish. But I can definitely say... Soonish


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There was a time I knew nothing about rhyme, in a place with drugs and crime and was crawling

through the grime. Like looking through a kaleidoscope cause my only friends were alcohol and

dope, I was on an exetremely slippery slope.


Then came the fall, couldn't walk had to crawl, I felt so small, behind the eight ball. While gitting

hit with wicked jabs, for my very soul it was trying to nab cause it's ultimate goal is to put on a

slab, by The Grace of God I was sent to Rehab.


Where I met a lot of good people some weren't so and I was taught to stay in the know, put

your pride aside, never go solo but let The Good Lord be your ammo because you're dealing

with a wicked and unseen foe, Hello.


I started to feel alright despite feeling contrite, I could see daylight with a stronge feeling to write.

A feeling I tried to ignore, thinking this is a real bore and completely out of sight, I'm not a writer, I

can't write.


Then a word came to me first one, then two, then three, I hear write them down, I see nobody. I

looked again the words started to form a weird looking poem that was well out of the norm.

What is this design? I had been introduced to Rapid Fire Rhyme.


Totally unorthodox and completely out of the box, am I delusional because I detoxed? Now it

can be fun some times it'll have me on the run, for it can become very hard but The Good Lord

is my hole card. Many times I've walked away, it'll just bring me back on another day.


Makes me grab my pencil or pen and start to write again because this rapid fire rhyme has a

certain design, once this I find, It'll go prime time. Now conventional rhyme did adhere and gave

me good cheer until rapid fire rhyme came on the frontier. Now conventional rhyme seems so



Because people this Rapid Fire Rhyme is... Purely Divine.



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Mysterious but just and it's a must that you trust.

Incomprehensible, from everlasting to everlasting,



Unchanged, may even seem very strange but

your life, He can rearrange. Pure although obscure

but you will feel the allure if through His Word, you

take a tour and He will ensur that you'll endure.


For I've been shaken, awaked but never forsaken.

Can make you think you're in a maze, going around

and around, up down, even sideways, I came out



I give Him all praise. For He is. The Ancient Of Days.


Daniel 7:9

Author's Notes/Comments: 


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Alive, this word brings some very good vibes. It means you have arrived, a beautiful spirit revived and it needs a high five cause it ain't no jive.


It means you're awake your life is yours to take so you can have and also eat your cake. Although you may experience heart ache when you find, some people in your life fake, even your best friend may turn out to be a snake.


Just be aware for life holds many a snare, when your world shake and quake give you a real scare, it wouldn't hurt to say a prayer, it will help to keep you square and it's for your sake coz there's so much at stake.


So be Alive and come out of the archives, strive and stay out of overdrive cause that can make you take a dive and if you connive you'll be deprived cause you're not here to just survive but thrive and that ain't no jive... Be Alive.

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To yearn is to have an inside burn a


Feeling that churn and deep concern.


All for something that has no return.


So the next time you discern a yearn


Learn to be stern for maybe that yearn


You'll need to earn.


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When you plant a good seed watch out for weeds. They will try to

Supersede and snuff out all good deeds.


Because weeds grow to impede and to do misdeeds. Once freed

The weed will proceed to take the lead and will have you treed



So take heed when you plant your seed, then see a weed don't let

It breed for they can make you concede.


Proofread then proceed with Godspeed.

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I met a young man, he was unique but found it a bit hard to speak. He said, it was because people think he's a freak, no support from his friends they were to busy calling him a geek.


He was so tired of his life being critiqued, it was making him weak and his life was looking pretty bleak.


Well your life is yours you don't have to sneak, at your life just take a peek, when they look at you they see mystique and you are more valuable than the most precious antique.


Whereas, keeping up with the Joneses is what they seek, only havoc on their lives is what this will wreak because what they see is really oblique, which is why they keep finding themselves up a creek.


You were made unique just spend time developing your own technique and don't freak when you go on a winning streak and become chic.


Be Unique, Develop Your Own Technique.

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