Hey, everyone this is to my Dad is Birthday is tomorrow 8/25! I hope my dad likes and u too! I'm not sure that it is that great, but it's okay!! Critique plz!!
This was acctually the first real poem I ever wrote. I made it for my father and a contest. My inspiration, was the fact that he was getting sent to war (duh).
I was going through some hard times when I wrote this, and I wanted to dedicate something to my two WONDERFUL brothers, Griffen and Lee. I love you both no matter what.