Forgive the length, i hope it's worth the read.
First off I've never been the poetic type, I just got the urge to write about what was on my mind, and it rhymed. But feel free to critique (or maybe if I'm lucky, compliment) my work.
Comments/Thoughts appreciated.
This is a creepy and cliche, love poem, that just came to me.
Thought I'd give one of these a try
The price for me. AND....you.
