Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your comment on this one. The original was flawed with a stupid typographical error, an omission that made the poem entirely different. I was shocked, this afternoon, to discover what a poor proofreader I really am, and it gets worse as I age. But thanks for visiting and commenting on the corrected version.
A witty and delightfully: A witty and delightfully unapologetic answer to a familiar complication in relationships. A pleasure to read, brilliant wordsmith!
So genuine and pristine in: So genuine and pristine in its devotion, its gratitude, that it almost visibly radiates. A precious jewel that no doubt makes the angels (And the Creator!) sing.
Be fully blessed, fine Poet.
I must disagree with..: I must disagree with your self-assessment. I would say you're very strong. I'll tell you why. You've placed this poem in a folder you call 'Dark and Moody'. You could have called it 'Mark and Doody'. Rather than go for the cheap laugh and saying something a five year old would find amusing, you stuck to your guns and named it what you felt was more appropriate to the subject at hand. Bravo!
Hi. I happened to notice..: Hi. I happened to notice you published this poem on January 12, 2012. It's now February 2024. Twelve years have passed. It's my sincere hope that they've gotten some by now. If they're still not getting any after 12 years, the issue may be psychological in nature. Therapy may be the answer. I can recommend a few if you're interested. Thank you.
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