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S74rw4rd commented on: Alpine Melt Water by Spinoza 40 weeks 1 day ago
This is an epic poem, an: This is an epic poem, an accumulation of verbally skilled phrases---some delightfully beautiful, some achingly beautiful, but all beautiful, and all giving full evidence of your superlative artistry as a Poet.  I cannot imagine how much time, or how much preparation, went into the composition of this great achievement; but I can see the great effects on the very screen in front of me.  The poem's purpose is disclosed in the final three lines, and these lines draw all the others together in a perfected orbit.  I was once told or read---so long ago I cannot now cite the source---that the purpose of Poetry is to show how efficiently, effectively and intensely the language can work, and be worked:  and this poem demonstrates that to the Nth degree.
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Teytonon commented on: CAN TREES FALL IN LOVE? by joy 40 weeks 1 day ago
In answer to your question..: In answer to your question You don't have to guess  Can trees fall in love? The answer is yes   There were two orange trees Standing in a grove One said to the other 'Wanna fall in love?'   The other tree said 'I'd be willing to give it a try  It sounds great, but my answer's no Here's the reason why'   You said 'Wanna fall in love?' You see I'm hot, hot as a stove Don't you know you should've used a word  A word that rhymes with 'grove'?   What the hell's the matter with you? With you, won't waste my time I can't be with someone Who doesn't know a poem must rhyme!   THE END  
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beaconzbard commented on: TO...........WOULD BE............... by beaconzbard 40 weeks 1 day ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/6bV2bZWdhH4
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georgeschaefer commented on: THANKFUL FOR OLD LOVE by joy 40 weeks 2 days ago
It's good to take a few: It's good to take a few moments each day to think of things to be thankful for
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Savvart commented on: Abundance by Savvart 40 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you for the kind words: Thank you for the kind words :)
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ramonathompsont commented on: Your blue eyes by GeneConner2008 40 weeks 2 days ago
good one: good one
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ramonathompsont commented on: I want to be everything by GeneConner2008 40 weeks 2 days ago
sweet poem. too bad romance: sweet poem. too bad romance does not really exist like this.
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beaconzbard commented on: HEAR MY DISTRESS by beaconzbard 40 weeks 2 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/RiaG4ZuRQ9k
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SSmoothie commented on: To bring some joy to earth by Spinoza 40 weeks 3 days ago
Beautiful! I love the: Beautiful! I love the analogiesand ideas. The wide eyed innocence and hope! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Diverging Roads by Spinoza 40 weeks 3 days ago
And sometimes that's just the: And sometimes that's just the way is so that's the way it goes! Nicely said and all. 
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arqios commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem On Prayer by S74RW4RD 40 weeks 3 days ago
Oh the joy of that hot live: Oh the joy of that hotline, live to Heaven! Prayer is like that red phone in Batman and of course the bat signal. But again, it isn't just the fixed place and time which New Testament faith exemplifies: in their homes, at the temple, in the synagogues, as they went, in each other's company: a truly ever reaching, ever stretching fellowship.
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arqios commented on: Ego – is always the enemy by Spinoza 40 weeks 3 days ago
First thing I encounter as I: First thing I encounter as I rouse from sleep in the morning and wrestle with sometimes quite visibly the rest of my waking hours! 
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arqios commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; *Until The Day Of Jesus Christ* by S74RW4RD 40 weeks 3 days ago
Indeed! Romans could be seen: Indeed! Romans could be seen as Paul's gospel account and Galatians considered a 'little Romans.' The prison epistles could be thought of as the rubber hitting the road, among other more delectable theological descriptives. Almost two-fold in that grouping: theoretical and applied expressions of faith. 
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Spinoza commented on: Alpine Melt Water by Spinoza 40 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you: Thank you my friend.
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S74RW4RD commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem On Prayer by S74RW4RD 40 weeks 4 days ago
Wow, thank you for that!  You: Wow, thank you for that!  You know how much I value your spiritual insights; and receiving a comment from you is a great privilege.  Since May of 1977, I have always loved that line from the last of T. S. Eliot's Four Quartets:  "You are here to kneel / Where prayer has been valid."  To me, that meaning is not restricted to only a sanctified building, or a chancel rail in a church.  The Early Christians prayed wherever they happened to be, so their prayers made of this world a place "where prayer has been valid," and therefore, while I am here, I am here to kneel in prayer.  When I first read the line, with the whole poem, in May, 1977, I was too immature to understand the wider meaning.  I was a naive freshman at college; and, during that particular term, my most pressing issues seemed to be which pair of jeans to put on in any given morning, and whether, like so many of my classmates at that time and place, the weather required that I wear flipflops, or could I walk to class or the dining hall barefoot?  So, in that world at that time, in its context, prayer was valid in a church building, where legitimate worship is carried on.  Now, far removed from that time and place, I understand Eliot's line to have a much wider reaching meaning.  Sorry if I have been verbose here; your comment inspired these thoughts.
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