Like little ants
in an anthill
memories of her
crawl though
my subconscious.
Wow. This just knocked me over with the intensity of the emotion, the freshness of the metaphor, and all of that compressed into such a few number of lines. I really, really like this one.
Starward
Wow. This just knocked me
Wow. This just knocked me over with the intensity of the emotion, the freshness of the metaphor, and all of that compressed into such a few number of lines. I really, really like this one.
Starward