DAWN'S DELIGHT

The fog

(with a cool sheath)

eases over the landscape

(a smooth silky coverlet)

vibrant wildflowers

touched by its dew

my emotions stroked

by an envelope

of ethereal air

on a summer’s morn

in my childhood

the aroma of

hot bacon frying

from the doorway

of my grandmother’s kitchen

(my senses seduced).

 

 

 

 


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sweetwater's picture

Delightful poem, it has so

Delightful poem, it has so much in it which bathes the senses, the bacon was a very clever, not to mention delicious, ending. sue.

word_man's picture

we all need to go back home

we all need to go back home sometimes,if only in our minds


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Soomth and lovely poem. Very enjoyed read.

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When one let's the coolness

When one let's the coolness of a fog touch him like dew upon wildflowers (which I saw as representing childhood ) and turns it into ahot bacon fat delight of artistry, he is a poet...indeed, a poet.

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Thank you.

Stephen

georgeschaefer's picture

lovely imagery and it made me

lovely imagery and it made me hungry at the same time.

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