EASED IN AS A COOL BREEZE

Her love came to him

with the gentleness of

a morning sun arisen

on a cloudless dawn

eased in as a cool breeze 

through his very essence.

 

 

 

 

 

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Incompl's picture

some find vitality and reason

some find vitality and reason in others, and it’s beautifully  devastating, and so is this write. Lovely.


Let your teeth show

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Beautiful, but those first

Beautiful, but those first two lines . . . wow . . . are among the most powerful you have ever written.


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