@ 27.055 MHz: Water Envy (Bishonen)

I envy the warm

pool into which you (naked,

except for striped socks)

plunged:  it receives, surrounds, and

kisses your body's beauty.

 

No shame would prevent

me from enclosing you---that

way---as I admit

you, nude or clad, into my

whole love, my soul's privacies.

 

Kyakuchuu

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patriciajj's picture

Agree with Cascade. Your use

Agree with Cascade. Your use of water in this explosive illustration of longing was brilliant, as was the idea of water as a lover, an embrace, you envy. So much passion, so much beauty. 

Starward's picture

Thank you very much for those

Thank you very much for those kind words.  Receiving comments from two of postpoems' finest is a high privilege and honor indeed.


Januarian

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Cascade's picture

I really like the emotional

I really like the emotional saturation of your desire in this, Starward.  Even envy alone without passion or love is of itself consuming, absorbing, drowning...

I often think of human emotions in terms of liquad. Excellent! 

Starward's picture

Thank you for your visit to

Thank you for your visit to the poem, and for the insight in your words:  much appreciated.


Januarian

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