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remains of our day
As the sun slips
into my heart
like a pocket and closes
I see nothing
but darkness
and feel the warmth
of you inside me
as I remember us
no matter what
the memory remains.
...
As the sun slips
into my heart
like a pocket and closes
I see nothing
but darkness
and feel the warmth
of you inside me
as I remember us
no matter what
the memory remains.
...
This is an amazing poem!
However, you deserve all the credit. This poem is in the author's note of Remains of the Sun.
Remains of our day is GREAT! Very tight and sweet, but with that element of finality, knowing that this too will, ultimately, end. Wonderful writing!
thanks but its your style
i was trying to create. so there! ;P influencer! love ya, humble n all my friend. hugss
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