Left In the last goodbye

 

 

 

Kiss my heart in whispers 

Hold my hand in faith

Keep my soul in spirit

My undying devotion in memory 

When my last breath is drawn

As every other,

It will be

in your honour. 

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CreativeWriterE's picture

Never

Ive never met somebody that had so much passion in their writing. I've read quite a few of your poems within my time being on here and Ive been so delighted. I feel what you are writing. | Kiss my hear in whispers | that is the most perfect line to involve in a love writing.


You've gotta pass hell to get to heaven..

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Thank you so much! :)

Thank you so much! :) blessingss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bishu's picture

A heart touching farewell indeed Respected S S

The name will be forgotten
The game will come to an end
I wish I could bid a nice farewell
To a nice dear unseen friend


©bishu 

 

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Lovely limerick bishu! Thanks

Lovely limerick bishu! Thanks for placing it kindly here ! :) hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

KindredSpirit's picture

I Love it

And I aint afraid to say so.

KS

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As we shucks thanks KS!  Big

As we shucks thanks KS!  Big ol' hugss xo


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

Somebody Said

there was no such thing as a perfect poem. I disagree - allets


 

 

SSmoothie's picture

A perfect poem allets? I’m

A perfect poem allets? I’m going to have this one framed with your comment hugss xx


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."