@ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Sijo On MultiTasking [ /;\ ]

Thrusts commence:  to his ankles, propped confortably on your shoulders,

turn your head; enjoy the scent or taste of his grass-stained soles sheathed in

semi-sheer socks (nuances to his nakedness).  Come to them.


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Volcanic simplicity. You have

Volcanic simplicity. You have certainly mastered this elegant form, and also added a frolicking, spontaneous and earthy element that alights upon the senses.


A fun, vibrant and delicately charged encounter that certainly gives new meaning to the word "multitasking".


Very nice.

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Thank you very much for

Thank you very much for validating the poem with the kindness of your comment and the authentic authority of your poetic presence.

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