UNTIL THE EYES BURN OUT

consciousness persists

time races forward

space traversing

diving and climbing

wordswordswords into thoughts.


the stream of consciousness

drives the individual reality

like a drunken psychotic rider

beating its frenzied exhausted steed

over the edge of the abyss

into eternal night of oblivion.

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A mind-blowing ride that

A mind-blowing ride that hurtles through the landscape of consciousness and the reality it manifests. For people creating their lives by default, without awareness of their inner power, it certainly feels like one is "a drunken psychotic rider/ beating its frenzied exhausted steed/  over the edge of the abyss . . ." 

 

With breathtaking whirlwinds of language and an intelligent message you created an amazing experience.