in love fallen

i don't want you to be yourself;

i want you to be

what you seem to be

in my desperately smitten mind.


where the mediocre

may become extraordinary

and the smell of shit and piss

is non-existent.

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I liked this poem, although

I liked this poem, although the expletives were a little bit of a stumble to the eye, but that is just me.  I think the poem describes one of the hardest transitions from adolescence to adulthood, one which I, personally, had some difficulty with during those difficult years.


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