My Affliction


In my affliction

is disinclination and

the brain lamenting


Small acute terror

A flame wroughtt in a frenzy

White dot of despair


Once carried now dropped

Because my iniquities



What's to come my God

Am I worthy still of Thee

Meditating dreams


Escape to promise

Allowing me to breathe peace

The chaos renounced


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Excellent Senryu sequence,

Excellent Senryu sequence, excellent imagery, and some very profound feeling conveyed!


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