My Affliction

 

In my affliction

is disinclination and

the brain lamenting

 

Small acute terror

A flame wroughtt in a frenzy

White dot of despair

 

Once carried now dropped

Because my iniquities

Intolerable

 

What's to come my God

Am I worthy still of Thee

Meditating dreams

 

Escape to promise

Allowing me to breathe peace

The chaos renounced

 

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Excellent Senryu sequence,

Excellent Senryu sequence, excellent imagery, and some very profound feeling conveyed!


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