River Song

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Vintage Words

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A brook is for wading,
lakes for fishing. Well waters
in dark depths wait calmly
for wishing.
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Grandfathers of rills,
the mothers of springs,
brothers to brooks,
sisters of streams, rivers
exist as wet wonders rumbling
roaring and rolling and hard
rock eroding.
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Rivers are passionate,
indifferent to time,
endlessly sculpting
an unseen
shoreline.
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A river, once swollen
to tidal wave stature,
crashed ashore
letting beaches shatter
when humbly begun as a
bead of water.

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allets.
04-25-15
6p


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Was wondering if better endings can happen Respected Madam WRose

Rivers are liquid soaps
that wash the world clean.
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Thanks For The Excellent Critique

I did not like the last lines either. After a word and a bit of time, the river feels and flows better. ~(:D)-



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