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You say my eyes never confirm my feelings
Like we are walking in and out of love as fast as they blink and nothing stays the same for too long except their tears
You say my thoughts never give away my mind
Like we are stealing moments from locked boxes in its vault, both of us removing keys from our necks to gain clarity of thought
You say my heart can feel you at my finger tips
Like we are tangible when we touch and life exists without us noticing that we type trepid texts more than we tell tempered truths
you say there is a passion in my voice
Perception in my soul
And beauty in my smile
That you see me when you look at me
And know that we were designed to disappear
And so we do
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Thanks for the comment. You're incredible . This is really great. I should think about this idea of getting inspired by someone elses writing too. You're a good place to start .
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I don't know what to say other than I am blushing :) Thank you for the comments, they are incredible!
I can't wait to see, not only what inspires you, but also what comes from the inspiration
Much Love
Ashley
That's so BEAUTIFUL!!!! I
That's so BEAUTIFUL!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! YES!
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make sure to read Beavis' poem they go together :)
and thanks love :)
Much Love
Ashley
haha ok def!
haha ok def!
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So yin & yang, light and dark, the dual flow is between them is amazing! Kind of reminds me of Onions & Burn! ;-) I love it! This line is just the soul of the poem for me, and everything flows outward from it, "Like we are tangible when we touch and life exists without us noticing that we type trepid texts more than we tell tempered truths" ;-)
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ah yes I should read them side by side and see how they fit, like Oinions and Burn :) I am glad you love it, given your poem inspired it if you hated it that would be sad :p
It is also interesting, for me the soul of the poem is: Like we are walking in and out of love as fast as they blink and nothing stays the same for too long except thier tears
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Much Love
Ashley
;-)
Just different perspectives;-) you know me Dear; jump in carefully & don't jump out until the ground rushes up ;-) spent a few days in the hospital over that theory once;-)
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you know me jump in without looking and then jump out when you discover the man eating BLANK ;)
spent my life in bad relationships due to that theory :p
Much Love
Ashley